I will never forget that time spent in the trenches, the pain, the death, at least I wasn’t alone. I had Freda, my dog, my friend. I hear screams whilst bullets are flying above the trench. The thunderous roar of another explosion leaves ringing in my ears, burning debris being hurled at my fellow soldiers, my friends. I see many men fleeing and shrieking as bullets fly closer to them. The majority of the screams stop. I peek out of the trench, all I can see is fire and dead bodies. After all of this I am sure to have PTSD. If I get out alive.No I can’t think like that. I must be brave for Freda, I must get her home safely.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 12 April 2017
ANZAC puppy
W.A.L.T write a flash back from a different perspective and use show, not tell. This week we have been writing a flash back based on 'the Anzac puppy' picture book. We got to choose which perspective we will write from, Freda the dog, Sam the soldier or Lucy the girl. I chose to write from Sam's perspective. This was extremely enjoyable to create. Next time I would add more parts about Freda.
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