Chaos in the hospital

WALT: Explore different ways of planning. We were given random characters, settings and problems that we had to turn into a story. I am happy with my work and think that my story is suitable and entertaining for all who read it. My next steps would be to add more detail and go into more descriptive language.

Last Monday, during the world cup final an all black was rushed to the hospital because he broke his arm. In the ambulance a police officer came with him because they were best friends. Once they got to the hospital he was taken to the emergency department to get treated. The police officer waited outside the room on a big chair, hoping her friend's injury wouldn’t cost him his career.

Out of no-where a gun shot boomed through the air. The police officer grabbed her gun and started to hunt for where it came from. After clearing the top two floors she went to the cafe. Bingo. A middle aged man was holding a pistol whilst the hostages in the cafe were cowering under the tables.

The police officer hid behind the door and started to asses the situation. From her four years of training she learned that she must arrest the man with as little casualties and possible. The man ran behind the counter and started firing rapidly, as he couldn’t find the police officer. One elderly man got shot in the arm. With one precise shot she knocked the gun out of the man’s hand. Within  a few, short minutes the man was arrested and the hostages were saved.

Later that day the all black and the police officer went to starbucks to get coffee and donuts in celebration. The man who got shot in the arm was treated and put in a cast to heal. The middle aged man was arrested and sent to jail for five years. The end.