I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 24 August 2017
Our freedom
WALT: use words and pictures to convey our thoughts. As a part of our social justice topic we created an image with a quote to go with it. I am happy with my images seeming I made them on google drawings rather than sumo paint.
Hey Rheanna, This is a fantastic google drawing - you have done an amazing job and should be proud. I like that you have explained in your introduction what you needed to be doing. This reminds me of a cultural day we had a school when everyone came dressed in their cultures native dress. To improve your post it would be good to make your drawing smaller so that it does not go over the edge of the page. Did you find making a poster a fun thing to do?
Hi Rheanna it's Lauren from Room 8, I really liked the detail that you put into the poster about social justice and I was wandering how long it took you to make this? Maybe next time you could... do nothing because I think that it is great. Look forward to seeing more work from you!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Rheanna,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic google drawing - you have done an amazing job and should be proud. I like that you have explained in your introduction what you needed to be doing. This reminds me of a cultural day we had a school when everyone came dressed in their cultures native dress. To improve your post it would be good to make your drawing smaller so that it does not go over the edge of the page. Did you find making a poster a fun thing to do?
Hi Miss Morgan, thank you for your wonderful comment. I really enjoyed making this poster and it was supposed to look like a cultural day.
ReplyDeleteGreat job at fixing the size of the poster! Tino pai!
DeleteThank you for the great advice. I think it looks heaps better.
DeleteHi Rheanna it's Lauren from Room 8,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the detail that you put into the poster about social justice and I was wandering how long it took you to make this? Maybe next time you could... do nothing because I think that it is great. Look forward to seeing more work from you!