I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi rheanna,you have porduced an awesome presentation for this week.I like how you added in why you would choose Charlie for a best friend.If I had to choose Mike Teavee because it sounds like he really enjoys games and activites.
Hi Rheanna,I really like how you set out your slideshow,You must have thought deep while doing this.I haven't read Charlie and the chocolate factory yet but I'm sure I'll read it soon.Did you enjoy reading the book?
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Hi rheanna,you have porduced an awesome presentation for this week.I like how you added in why you would choose Charlie for a best friend.If I had to choose Mike Teavee because it sounds like he really enjoys games and activites.
ReplyDeleteGreat effort Rheanna. Love the slides. I didn't realise Roald Dahl has written all those books.
ReplyDeleteLook forward to your next post. Thanks Mum :)
Hi Rheanna,I really like how you set out your slideshow,You must have thought deep while doing this.I haven't read Charlie and the chocolate factory yet but I'm sure I'll read it soon.Did you enjoy reading the book?
ReplyDeleteyes I have thanks
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