Tuesday, 14 June 2016

week seven reading ( charlie and the chocolate factory )

Charlie’s Mum’s diary
Dear diary
Tuesday 3d of March
I am feeling really bad, I am unable to provide for Charlie, my darling boy. I have tried to slip my piece of bread under the table but he refuses to take it. It is starting to get into spring, we are getting less hungary. I will talk later, got to make the cabbage soup.

Wednesday 4th of march
Dear diary
Things are getting tougher, Charlie is now 9 and almost always hungry. There is not enough food here. He has started to walk to school ten minutes earlier to prevent having to run and waste energy. I know this isn’t fair, to do this to a growing boy, but we have no choice. I have nothing else to talk about. Good bye. Got to make the cabbage soup.


The task… Write a diary entry for two consecutive days for one of the characters in the book.
Please let me know if I have achieved this!

3 comments:

  1. It is really good Rheanna. It is really sad. I'm sad. You made me have sad emotions. REALLY MASTERLY!! ( it means really good and awesome)

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  2. Ok thanks for your comment, I think ?

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    1. It's sad because they are poor and what happens to you if you don't eat everyday? Think about it Rheanna.

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