I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday 24 November 2017
Saint Rose of Lima
WALT: create a timeline for a saint of your choice. This is my timeline about Saint Rose of Lima. I have a link for extra information. I found deciding what information to include difficult. Next time I will get more important time events.
Hi Rheanna, it's Lauren from Room 8. I think that your information was very descriptive. I would like to find out what "Roses" name was before she changed? Anyway the way you presented was very smart. I look forward to seeing more work from you.
Hi Rheanna it's Antonette from Room 8. I like the way how you designed your timeline of Saint Rose of Lima like how you put in roses to represent Rose's name. Maybe next time you could make the text a little bit bigger so people could read it easily. I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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Hi Rheanna, it's Lauren from Room 8. I think that your information was very descriptive. I would like to find out what "Roses" name was before she changed? Anyway the way you presented was very smart. I look forward to seeing more work from you.
ReplyDeleteHi Rheanna it's Antonette from Room 8. I like the way how you designed your timeline of Saint Rose of Lima like how you put in roses to represent Rose's name. Maybe next time you could make the text a little bit bigger so people could read it easily. I look forward to seeing more of your work!
ReplyDeleteAloha Rheanna,Its shelby from room 4 I really liked your DLO it was really cool theres nothing bad about it
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